Hey Guys,
Today I hit 400 followers, so I just wanted to say a quick thank you for that. You are all AMAZING, and to properly celebrate, I thought I would share with you the first short story I am writing for this blog. I hope you like it. After all, it is for you. Fingers crossed.
We were there. The two of us. Just sitting, letting life pass us by, remaining silent, but the world around us was just as loud as ever. Sound coming from every corner, flooding into my ears.
I just wanted to be with you, savour the precious little moments we had left. It wasn’t too much to ask for, was it?
A shadow of doubt crosses my mind, wondering if after today, after this last moment leaves us, if you would forget me. I reach out to touch you, but remember that I can’t, not anymore. It is too late to get back what we once had. Everything we once were was already gone, and there is no way to get it back.
Gone. Just like me.
I know what happened that day broke you, tore you apart. Even now, after all of this time. I wish I could feel your pain, but that’s the problem, I can’t feel anything anymore. All I can do is sit here and know you have to move on. It’s probably time.
I watch you intently as you get up, the tears falling down your face as you look down one last time. I could have sworn you looked right at me, but how could you, when I am no longer here. I am just a spirit of the girl I used to be.
As you walk away, I fade away into the night, this time, it’s for good!
Congrats on 400 followers! Also, I really like the story so far. Can’t wait to read more!
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Aww thanks! I appreciate it. I just thought I would see what I could come up with for a short story 😀
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Congrats!
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Thanks! Was the story ok?
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Yeah I loved it!
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Thanks! Just checking! 🙂
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this is really well written and just i love that ending !!
congrats btw !
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Aww thank you very much 😀 I was worried about it! Oh and thanks 🙂
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i can’t wait to read more !
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I need to get writing then haha 😉
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Hey congrats on the 400 followers, keep up the good work!!! And I LOOOOVED your story! XD It was so amazing, I just can’t find the words to describe it!!! You’re really talented by the way!! XD
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Hey! Thank you! I was really nervous about sharing it, but thank you! I appreciate it! I just really enjoy writing 🙂
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No problem!!! XD It was really nice!!!
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Aww thanks! I am kind of relieved haha!
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Haha!! XD
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Congrats! How long have you been blogging?
Lovely writing, btw. Can’t wait to read more. :]
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Thanks! Oh I started this blog on the 25th of October, but reached 100 in January.
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congratz on 400!
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Thank you!!! 😀
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welcome =)
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🙂
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Congratulations of 400-you deserve every one of them! 🙂 xx
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Thanks! That’s so nice of you!!! ☺ xx
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Congrats on the 400(!) followers and I love the story so beautiful
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Aww thank you very much! I really appreciate it ☺☺
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NB you will be writing a second part to the story?
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It’s only a short story! I will however, try and write more stories on the future 🙂
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Cool. I think it’s a great aspect to add to your blog. You’ve got a talent. Use it
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Thanks! I have always enjoyed writing 🙂
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YAAAYYY WELL DONE CHLOEEEE!!!!!
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AWWW THANK YOU!!!
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WELCOME 😀
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YAYYY CONGRATS!! 😀 and your story is AMAZING so far! 🙂
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THANKS!!! 😀 Oh and I am glad you liked it 🙂
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Congrats!!
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Thanks! 🙂
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OH MY GOD GOOD JOB 400 IS SO GOOD
btw your story was AMAZING
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THANK YOUUUUU 🙂 I appreciate this a lot!
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YOURE WELCOME 🙂
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400 followers its a big achievement and yet u hav a long way to go….congrats…enjoying ur achievement with giving us this beautiful story…its really nice 🙂 😃😀😁 here come ur new follower
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Aww thank you! I know! I am quite shocked. I just really enjoy writing, and thought it was about time I posted a little story haha! Thanks for the follow 🙂
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Congratulations on 400, you’re bound to get more soon with your amazing writing! 🙂
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THANKS 🙂 😀 Awww! I am glad you enjoyed my story!!!
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I’m quite surprised by the shift of tone with the last exclamation mark, it felt like it ended of on a less negative note 🙂 I really liked your story and didn’t see the twist coming. Very emotional and heartfelt, I like it 😊 Please write more, I’m on board!
SO FAST!! Congrats on 400 wooh!
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I was literally just writing, and wanted to see where it took me, and that twist was just a quick thought haha! I am glad you liked it though! Oh I need to get writing more then 😉 HAHA! THANKSSSSSSSS!!!
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Congrats and this was written so well!
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Thank you!!! 😀 😀 😀
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Welcome^’^
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CONGRATS!! That is awesome! And I loved your short story 🙂
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Aww thanks!!! 😀 I am glad you liked it. I was slightly nervous about it!
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You really don’t have to be! You are so talented 🙂
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I guess you’re right! I just doubt myself a lot. Thanks 🙂
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No problem 🙂
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This is awesome. Well done you!
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Aww thank you! 🙂
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